ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
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2004-12-12
04:03 PM
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~*~
A moment came absent of the lock Which hung on it’s curved bangle by the door And winter brought the heavier winds helping shoulder Creeking back the hardwood in a single power greater Releasing the seasons, and whispering tears tied at wrist Vigilance freed, on wings of silver trim streamer to skyward Now weathered, dreams took a cautious step into his garden Visible the hidden of his heart brought out to sunshine And her hair grown long and lustrous fell upon his shoulder Making silent silken rivers in its wake, urging time And he faced the long and lonely knee jerk of spoken Without banter, without pressure and naked in truth Dispassionately prevailing winds of reason, told flat and hard Unnoticed in the sway of blossomed meadows wild and hot cheeked She stood close to his mouth, looking up into twin pools of indigo deep Letting go of everything but mercy and chance Settling his soul in two words blown against his lips Beautiful man
Copyright Kkh 12/12/04
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© Copyright
2004
Kathleen Harris
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Magnus
Member Laureate
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA
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2004-12-12
07:29 PM
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Ok Websters...you went and did it again... and an enjoyable read as well.
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garysgirl
Member Laureate
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237
Florida, USA
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2004-12-12
08:05 PM
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Oh my, Kathleen, your writing does make me speechless. All that I seem to be able to say, is absolutely beautiful. Hugs,
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Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
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posted
2004-12-12
08:36 PM
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Wonderful wonderful write Kathleen... very much enjoyed. Hugs~Nancy Season's Greetings!
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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
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2004-12-13
07:44 PM
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sounds like the ecstacy of surrender total rapture in these words
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
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posted
2004-12-13
11:09 PM
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Ah, now...THIS... a study... here I thought I knew and yet you paralleled the meaning of your title so very well...
so very well, in fact, that innuendo and innocence blended into wonder...
and I wonder if I shall ever dig beneath your intrigue...
you are a delightful, splendiferous poet...
so when is your book going to come out?
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*Alli4000*
Member Elite
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188
The World of Poetry
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posted
2004-12-13
11:19 PM
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~Alli~Happy Holidays!
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