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Love Not Enough
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Love Not Enough |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City 
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Love, not enough and coming too late to a delinquent sorrow, your hands that would at last be gentle as the subtle fluid of some black heart, seeps less black, less innocent of night, my voice subdued, no less gentle, hands harshly held at arms length to strengthen the quiet bliss, apt to the ignorance you've kept me in, to let a soul take wing and to bring, in love that which by whose syntax we find, to join our bodies to our minds. 2004 copyright babygirLPress **Intoxicant to the SouL** [This message has been edited by babygirlwlove (11-09-2004 06:43 PM).] |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
no less gentle, hands held harshly held at arms length to strengthen the quiet bliss, apt to the ignorance you've kept me in, to let a soul take wing oh YES! I love the way you write... well done BBG. The greatest beauty on earth, is |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
absolutely beautiful and delightful read everytime I click on you, it's better then the one before...your a flowering artist right up there with the Masters. |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
thank you both! love&light, **babygirL** **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
your hands that would at last be gentle as the subtle fluid of some black heart, seeps less black, These lines have special meaning for me... I like this very much! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
quote: Know that feeling but to me it "sucked" LOL, all or nothing Gemini reporting for love here. Beoootyful lady. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
is it ever too late? I know at times it feels that way, but doubt it in truth.... nicely done ma'am.. as usual, it layers voices and imagery well.. |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
thank you all for stopping in on my lunacy...it is greatly appreciated... and chief~ your words always still me into thought, love...thank you... **babygirL** **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
eew the L word.. nice writing bgirl, this one says everything that needs to be said. nice tight package..um... i was still talking about the poem lest i get something thrown at me |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This reminded me, for some reason, of thoughts at a potter's wheel... and don't ask me why, but that is what came to mind, perhaps it's the silkiness of the feel of it, and the potency of becoming. lovely tho (and yep, I'm weird)  still reading you babygirl  enjoyed |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
cool write...I always enjoy reading yours |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
hands harshly held at arms length to strengthen the quiet bliss, yes~~ agree with you M |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
thank you all for stopping in on this... Raph~nice tight package(the feeling is mutual)...about your poetry, of course...BTW...speaking of tight packages...still have thatuniform...although I got booted from the catholic school...**LMAO** Serenity~ thanks for staying with me... love & light, **babygirL** **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Hmmm, sounds like you might have gotten snuck up on while wearing your wistful Nice, nice, nice... |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
two words..photo evidence lol |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
Wranx...lol...thanks for feeling me.... Raph~...LOL...you got mail.... thanks guys! **babygirL** **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
cruel trick! pbllllllt |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
**LMAO** **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
the infinite . . . beautiful Mari |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
thank you littlewing **babygirL** **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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