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Evolution in Oils |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal 
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I am as I am A myriad of colors Painted in imperfection Yet blended well All facets of the spectrum Folding one into the other An impressionist's dream A model for modernism Defined at times by cubism Surreal in my lines Yet touched too By the brush of the old masters In the genteel realism Of time honored tradition And Elizabethan feel I am as I am A portrait of contradictions Drawn into one image Of woman in flux s.a.t. Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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~DreamChild~ Senior Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 544in your dreams |
wow, this poem helped me see myself more clearly, i think. lol  good write, great read! |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Hope you dont mind Susan I wanted to see if I could capture the feelings and I could for the first part, hence the digest. Dave I am me Different Imperfect Adjustable Water'd down In hues As you would like Me to fit in Sitting awkwardly Attentive And sensitive Yet touched too By the brush of the old masters In the genteel realism Of time honored tradition And Elizabethan feel I am as I am A portrait of contradictions Drawn into one image Of woman in flux s.a.t. Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy i |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Wow Susan! Love this and putting into my library. hugs, Chris Don't forget my presents!! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
And what a flux! A fantastically blended image! Wonderful! Love and hugs. Margherita |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
"I am as I am A portrait of contradictions Drawn into one image Of woman in flux" This could stand alone as a poem... But I did enjoy the rest...very nice.. _________ice/ford ><> |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
A portrait of contradictions Drawn into one image Of woman in flux yes a portrait indeed . mine's still watercolor, changing as the strokes are stroked on my canvas very crafty words |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
always did have a thing for a woman that fluxed around a bit |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
....Saved before I forgot to!!!  My goodness gracious! You are a work of art, Mona Lisa! ~ and you write as good as you look!  Absolutely fantastic, Super Susan! A self-portrait magnifique! Love & Light, Linda |
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A Tone of Voice Member
since 2001-07-18
Posts 287 |
A portrait of contradictions Drawn into one image Of woman in flux I agree with ice, this alone does it! Very nice and something I can certainly relate to~ *smile* Atov~ |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Very good write Susan!  ~Alli~ Happy Holidays! |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Thank you all, my friends, for your kind comments and encouragement - you warm my heart - Dave - when you come to the old masters - it is about being old fashioned in many senses -so I am modern - I am filled with many moods and open to many things, but still am traditional in many areas - and as we all are, I am under the evolution of learning and growth - Good morning all - and thank you again-  SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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