Open Poetry #34 |
For See-More At Eighty Three |
ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Seymour Tabin at eighty three: If he wants, can wear purple And cover his head with red Like Jenny Joseph, And spit (like she) If he feels like it. And if someone on the street, Or in a store, makes tease Like "that's the wrong hat", He can bark a remark Like "I'll do as I please", Because "I am eighty three" One thing for sure; We men of younger age Need him, To touch our lives With metaphor and song, Especially we Whose dads are gone. I see a waving hand In the breaks of his stanzas, That beckons me forth, And I become less afraid Of the rough trail of age. Thank You Seymour, For smoothing the path. Come read to me some poem, Some simple and heartfelt lay, That shall soothe this restless feeling And banish the thoughts of day. Longfellow [This message has been edited by ice (12-11-2004 08:44 PM).] |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Here here! |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
What a delight - much enjoyed, as I'm sure Sy will too -- Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent write Ford! Well done and I'm sure Sy will enjoy this! |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ford...I agree with you and it's true for woman too! Thanks for writing this! |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
RS-Susan-Nancy-Martie Thank you for the replies, but please give all praise to Seymour...without him as a subject, this poem would not exist... ___________ice/ford ><> |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Isn't he just the loveliest man? *sighing* He truly is, and we're all blessed by his gentle good humor and grace. Thanks for giving me the opportunity to say so, ice. Hugs for you both. |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I see a waving hand In the breaks of his stanzas, That beckons me forth, ~*~ I see that hand too, Ford... and it is always waving us in, and never away... Wonderful tribute! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ice Thank you for this thoughtful poem. LOL you know at eighty three you can say alot of things you can't when you're younger. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Ice, this is a wonderful poem about a wonderful man. Thank you for writing it for our Seymour!! Hugs, Ethel |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
LOL, yep, he can wear a purple tutu with a big yellow bow and carry a magic wand and we will still read *sigh* |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Happy Birthday Mr.See-More. Great job Ford. :-) Within this heart you'll find love |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
How thoughtful! I have to tell you thought that if Sy can't get to do what he wants at 83, his wife Isabel with whoop the butt of the person trying to stop him, honest! They are the cutest couple you've ever seen and still hold hands, I just love that. They teach us all well. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
what a nice gift! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
ice, what a thoughtful ~ and very touching! ~ gesture to honour our venerable Sigh Man! I thoroughly enjoyed it! ~ and you were right on the money! God bless you both! & Linda |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Thank you all for your posted replies.. Each one is very special, to me, and I know "See More" appreciates them also... He is entitled to all praise given here...We revolve around older people like him, those of us who have been driven to disrespect for older generations in the past..We need him in our lives... Peace_________ice |
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