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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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Against a white sky On a blue horizon A black ship Is sailing |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Move the 'A' up a line and you've a haiku. When that black ship sinks we all get wet. |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Nice! Perfect, actually |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
perfectly done! |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Nicely written!  ~Alli~ Happy Holidays! |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
the color of the lense is worng. good and still good. |
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