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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Hedging feverish attempts at establishing relationships We were music for thousands conducted by a hedge conductor feeling images working the shape of garden shears deciding differentials As images entwined to entomb A landscaping environment |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this makes me think of spring...and all the old loves, becoming new again  very much enjoyed |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Wow Dave...i like this alot... ~Alli~ Happy Holidays! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Dave Good metaphors for the growth within this piece. Eric |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Thanks. I was trying to look at how we take innocent steps in what we feel are secret yet fail to realise that everyone has been there before and the reason the hedge was there, which was the starting point of clumsiness in relationships was because the owner got fed up with seeing courting couples on the only half height wall around. Dave |
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