Open Poetry #34 |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion ![]() |
I can't get you off of my mind, You're a one in a million find, I know that you're a one of a kind. I can't sleep anymore without you, I've tried everything what can I do? I know to me you'll always be true. Can't eat right any longer, Loving you makes me weak yet stronger, Turned me into a starving love monger. Unhappy when you're away, In our bed I wait and stay, To hear you come in and just say "Hey". I'm not myself without you.. And without you I wouldn't know what to do, Without you I'm not whole, You captivate my very soul. Yes.. Only You... does your fire burn? can you hear me? ILL JUST KNOCK THIS WALL RIGHT DOWN |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Yes. Like it. Dave |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I'm bound to believe that for every person there is a special one, that no one else could ever come close to completing us, like that one person does...perhaps our twin? But it certainly does exist and is written as you have done here.... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sounds like love to me! Love looks good on you Kyle....best of luck. Hugs~ ~ Let peace begin with me... ~ |
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Nightshade![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Very nice Kyle. Enjoyed. Chris ![]() "At one glance |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very romantic |
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*Alli4000*![]()
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Great write...very nice. ![]() ~Alli~ Happy Holidays! |
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