Open Poetry #34 |
Tree of Christmas |
whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Ball balls hung on branches green Lights that shine inbetween Tinsel drapped around shapely cone Angel sits high on her throne Stars hung reflecting light Snowmen scattered with delight Golly santa too is there Hung on tips his glee to share Curled over leaves are candy canes Icicles drop to look like rain Bells dance in window pane Gold and silver bows arranged Presents stacked high and bright Anticipate Saint nick tonight "Dont cry because its over, smile because it happened. " [This message has been edited by whiskey (12-09-2004 10:30 PM).] |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Very nice. I like the sense of humour. Dave |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
very well done, getting me in the mood and smells of Christmas... |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Very nice write gal.....Jack Daniels couldn't have written it better Ms Whiskey |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
wonderful and delightful! |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
lol...that first line made me laugh.. Well done! "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Very good write! Love this! ~Alli~ Happy Holidays! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Delightful read...most enjoyable. Hugs~ ~ Let peace begin with me... ~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
tis the season |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
just decorated mine yesterday...so pleasant to sit here and see Nice to read you...Hope the family is well M |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
very nice read |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
a fun read to set the mood! Enjoyed a bunch! miscellanea |
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