Open Poetry #34 |
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Revelations Of Reveal |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA ![]() |
What is wrought this wearied and worn hand from darkness yon the breech? A place born of a plan, to thee it must beseech. A gift perhaps of welling tides, of foam afore the seas, of places where our fear resides... In wait of what we see. A moment of welling truth, of telling words that fall on tenderness...a whispered thought to quell and sooth, to love and we to bless. A page upon a sandy shore, where vaunted wisdom lies in wait....In search of thoughts we must explore, to see and then relate. For from the sun of shimmer cast comes a warmth to bask and feel, unfurled upon a glimmer seen....and to one’s heart is sealed. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
A gift perhaps of welling tides, of foam afore the seas, of places where our fear resides... In wait of what we see. A moment of welling truth, of telling words that fall on tenderness...a whispered thought to quell and sooth, to love and we to bless. A page upon a sandy shore, where vaunted wisdom lies in wait....In search of thoughts we must explore, to see and then relate. For from the sun of shimmer cast comes a warmth to bask and feel, unfurled upon a glimmer seen....and to one’s heart is sealed. ================================= ahh Barry, Barry...this is lovely.... what a pleasure this was to read aloud... loved the imagery and theme... clever form and presentation too.. ya know the moth loves ellips. ![]() very very well done poet sir. Ink runs from the corners of my mouth. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Barry, What ever JM said isn't she something. |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Yes Sy, our moth is quite a lady...when she speaks...we all listen, don't we? Thank you JM for your wonderful thoughts, do so gladly receive them. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thank yu Dixie dear...always a pleasure to read or see your thoughts. |
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