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Untitled reminder of one of my mind dumps
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Untitled reminder of one of my mind dumps |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
This is pretty raw and the words that made me think of it have a relevance in the spirit I wrote this in and how I felt untitle's words made me think. dave ******************************************** Your heart the Lady said A trouble to no soul You landed lightly in her arms And if I may make so bold The world the Lady offers Is boon to any soul And gentle pastures beckon Before you are very old Pay in kind Pay in fear Pay in coin Pay in beer Pay with your life Pay with your thanks Why pay my man The burden is light For a heart as yours We don't need coin If you needed your heart Then we would join In a contract for your mind But your soul O do be kind |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
actually, this had the feel of Hobbitry to it. I found myself wishing for a fire and a mug o mead. Enjoyed, Dave.  |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Good poem Juju |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
serenity blaze It was a start to something that will work out one day but I doubt if the world wants it. Richochet which as also part, if I can find it I will publish. Thanks Dave Juju Need work but it has seen the light of day Dave |
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