Open Poetry #34 |
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temptation |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
temptation time can be place place time as stems tremble toward the touch one yellow trumpet flower bending bending down to the rose so pink stiff toward the touch the touch as we tremble toward the touch that cannot be |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Your spacing is "just enough" to make the stem of the flower tremble in anticipation... it must be nice to have flowers where you are... we are bare and naked, now... winter shivered the last of the leaves away... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Jamie Time is so hard sometimes, or soft...it likes to play with us I think...we think we can bend it to our will, but we can only be, within it. ![]() |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
ooooooooo, yes...very nice |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is incredibly lovely. *S* Alone, without formatting, your words are beautiful... but... with an artist's touch, you give us a presentation that's visual magic.... I felt myself leaning as I read... as if that would help the blossoms conquer those last few millimeters. *S* Beautiful work! *S* |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Great one James. Enjoyed. JL |
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