Open Poetry #34 |
Faded Reality Dream (scene 4) |
Don_Juan Member
since 2004-04-08
Posts 252Far from where I am going |
Monotonous ramblings of an unenthusiastic instructor fall upon the groans of unmotivated pupils. black boards and chalk fade from sight as ivory sands and aqua waves break across vision. tropical tastes set across parched tongues serenity sets over every muscle. flashes of storm struck lightning split second serenity sacrifice. sands become charred earth life giving water becomes flowing fire. mangled horns upon a head of pure evil body of a lizard approaches with footsteps of darkness grappling motionless throats hissing through unholy tongues "I am Chizrik Char. Remember this well." claws release with insrumountable force as ground meets body and dust settles over Shadrach's eyes. (this is the fourth scene in my poem/movie. i hope you all enjoy) nice use of muffin aim= FlyingScrew. message me if you feel. |
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Dautz Write Member
since 2004-11-16
Posts 96 |
It was interesting to see how quickly you changed the tone and intensity in this. Enjoyed! dautz |
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Don_Juan Member
since 2004-04-08
Posts 252Far from where I am going |
thank you for dropping in. nice use of muffin |
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Dautz Write Member
since 2004-11-16
Posts 96 |
My pleasure. dautz |
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