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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2005-02-05 05:47 AM

                         In the end—
                    a fat old woman
                         feeding her dog

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2005-02-05 06:21 AM

smile

I'm not sure if I want you to reincarnate as an old fat woman or a dog--

and either would be redundant.

(That was my mean response and somehow I think you can take it.)

But I did enjoy this, and woof and moan, either way, it hit too close to home.

(can I smile now?)

sheesh.

Tell me you have a sense of humor...???

Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

2 posted 2005-02-05 06:28 AM

serenity blaze

Oh yes, this is intended very much
to be open to interpretation as the reader sees fit.

Glad you read it.

Thank you.

John

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

3 posted 2005-02-05 06:32 AM

Glad you wrote it.

Thank you.

Karen

(it may not have showed but I really liked this)

GG
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since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

4 posted 2005-02-05 06:35 AM

lol @ Ser

Yep, I think we all know that the dog is a female... It's just a given.

Thanks for this, John. I needed a funny image as I sit here wide awake in the middle of the night.

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

*Alli4000*

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since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

5 posted 2005-02-05 07:22 PM

Awesome write!

~Alli~

*AIM = Alli4000* Journal!

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

6 posted 2005-02-05 08:41 PM

They might well enjoy each other's company.

And ... whether fat or slim, old or young .... the END is just a new BEGINNING.

Great image.
Love, Margherita

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

7 posted 2005-02-05 09:07 PM

LOL, some unusual senryu imagery

Soulfisher
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since 2005-01-07

Posts 226
where ever the fly fishing is good

8 posted 2005-02-05 09:22 PM

BUT WAS SHE GIVIN THE DOG A BONE

Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

9 posted 2007-04-23 06:42 PM

Little girl
in memory of her
beloved grandma.

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