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scorpio
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0 posted 2004-12-05 08:39 PM


Touch

Touching smooth soft skin
Such electric excitement
At my finger tips.

believe in what your heart feels...
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1 posted 2004-12-05 08:41 PM

I like.
Such a feeling for so few words.
Well done...

Always, Alyssa

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...I am a girl of tears.
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2 posted 2004-12-05 08:47 PM

scorpio
GOOD ONE, ENJOYED.
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3 posted 2004-12-05 08:55 PM

I could actually feel the words you were writing...good write!

~Alli~

Happy Holidays!
scorpio
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4 posted 2004-12-05 09:00 PM

Alyssa thank you for your kind comments.

Thank you Sy.  I'm glad you liked this.

Very much appreciated Alli.  Thank you.

believe in what your heart feels...
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i like


Enchantress
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6 posted 2004-12-05 09:34 PM



Magic fingers touch
the essence of my being
gently in the night.

Good one Scorpio!
~Smiles, hugs & love ya, Tinker~
scorpio
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7 posted 2004-12-05 09:42 PM

Thank you Marsha..much appreciated.

Thank you Tinker.  Your reply is so beautiful.  In the night..a touch...soft.

believe in what your heart feels...
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8 posted 2004-12-05 10:00 PM

Very beautiful, Scoprio. I love the romance!!
Hugs,
Ethel
scorpio
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9 posted 2004-12-06 08:35 AM

Thank you Ethel. Romance is the spark.

believe in what your heart feels...
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scorpio
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11 posted 2004-12-06 08:53 AM

Thank you Tinker..

believe in what your heart feels...
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Electric chills...



Enjoyed, Sir
scorpio
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13 posted 2004-12-06 02:02 PM

Thank you Karilea.  Love is both emotional and tactile.

believe in what your heart feels...
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14 posted 2004-12-06 04:19 PM

yes... the essence of it well said..

nice work my friend..
scorpio
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15 posted 2004-12-06 04:31 PM

Thank you Ron. Very much appreciated!

believe in what your heart feels...
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