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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2004-12-05 01:42 PM

I think of our mountain
the one you saw with your skin
and I with my eyes
when you whispered
with your lips on my fingers

some god moved it there
without even faith
just to see if I would follow
with my daydreams
and hurry feet ache

it was not your laughter
that strummed the windows
of that gauze seamed heaven
but your tears
making the cling memories

and I wore my jeans
to work the soil of your love
where unsaid would be turned
in to love words
and you would draw more trees

our forests would be our children

____________
Dark

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

1 posted 2004-12-05 02:29 PM

Quite stirring...
You write brilliantly DS.
TD

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2004-12-05 04:17 PM

but your tears
making the cling memories

~*~

Yes, Kathleen said it best...

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

3 posted 2004-12-05 04:31 PM

Damn D - this is deeply stirring and beautiful -

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

4 posted 2004-12-05 04:31 PM

amazing...

~Alli~

*:.AIM = Alli4000.:*
Happy Holidays!

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

5 posted 2004-12-05 05:50 PM

amazing

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

6 posted 2004-12-05 07:08 PM

DS

This stirs me too...makes me feel a bit sad and also want to give you a hug.

babygirlwlove
Senior Member

since 2004-10-10

Posts 1180
New York City

7 posted 2004-12-05 08:22 PM

where unsaid would be turned
in to love words

damn, that's niiice...

**babygirL**

**Intoxicant to the SouL**

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

8 posted 2004-12-06 06:56 AM

absolutely beautiful!!!!!

Morning D.

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

9 posted 2004-12-06 01:34 PM

Now that was some rototiller

absolutely a beautiful piece of work, beautiful!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

10 posted 2004-12-06 01:57 PM

wonderful work here D.
...sending slow hugs your way.

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

11 posted 2004-12-06 04:21 PM

and I wore my jeans
to work the soil of your love
where unsaid would be turned
in to love words
and you would draw more trees

nicely done as always my friend... always a plesure to open one of yours and read...

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