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Open Poetry #34

December

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2004-12-04 01:23 PM

The snow
falls
so
slowly

as if
lonely

for someone
far away

~DreamChild~
Senior Member

since 2001-04-23

Posts 544
in your dreams

1 posted 2004-12-04 01:25 PM

i like how you related loneliness to snowfall. perhaps the snow has yet a strong will, to keep moving, even so slowly.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2004-12-04 01:40 PM

Yes it does...like the thought here~

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2004-12-04 01:47 PM

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

4 posted 2004-12-04 03:38 PM

Short yet sad write.

wow...

~Alli~

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Don’t cry because it’s over, smile because it happened...

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

5 posted 2007-05-15 09:02 PM

beautiful.

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