Open Poetry #34 |
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High Heels On The Hard Rock Of My Soul |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows ![]() |
Does anybody know a simple love song, one that has no ego needs no pride, a song that would go prowling on the back roads, with room to take a tired man for a ride? It doesn’t have to be a golden oldie; I don’t want to weep for lovers who have died; I want to see the world again through new eyes, with lyrics that bring rhymes I haven’t tried. Someone told me I might need a little romance to take the bitter edge off of my soul; I laughed because I see the headland’s highways; and I miss the simple state of feeling whole; I just watched a brilliant Autumn dawning, through blue water eyes as from a ship broached on a shoal; the lee shore tide surrounds me with my wreckage as the waves of time digest it with each roll. ©2004 by icebox |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
icebox Excellent write this morning, enjoyed. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
'I might need a little romance to take the bitter edge off of my soul" Oddly, it was romance that gave me my bitter edge... Pass the Chambord and we will sit by the fire and talk about Nina. ![]() ![]() "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
There are such songs, I'm singing one at this moment, one of several I've learned over the years....I'd share it with you but for a simple truth of it: It has no music or words. Such a thing just can't be shared; it's either within you or it's not, you either hear it unaided, or you do not. ~~J |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I want to see the world again through new eyes, yes, yes, and another yes ![]() I understand this. M |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
icebox "Does anybody know a simple love song, one that has no ego needs no pride, a song that would go prowling on the back roads, with room to take a tired man for a ride?" There is a song and the title is, Silly Love Song. I'm not sure who sang it back awhile ago...but the lyrics are timeless. ![]() |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Enjoyed this.. How about "Night Moves"? It's a GREAT song! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
icebox, someone told me that once too laughing, I suppose, is a common reaction |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed ![]() |
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MGROVES![]() ![]()
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
dear sir or should i sing wisdom man of mine your love goes back amongst ancient time where romans roam making love so carelessly didnt see the sign so ruins they came to be love is blind but control isn't kind let them dwell in their sin become blind to whats happining within to their surprise i took them beyond the skies told of what the future holds but yet they let sin take control man's fate god's hate lies despise love devil will shove who will win numbers again in the sky 6 element 6 signs 6 cycles now your turn to disciple |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
icebox: I am in awe of your work. Have been reading the archives and sit in amazement.You who have so much to give. Thank you for your thoughts and how you express them. marty |
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