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the transience of our love.......repost
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the transience of our love.......repost |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio 
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Gift of the clouds making love to the sky rendevous at midnight dreamlover and i, celestial rapture a sprinkling of white descent off this dark ledge leap of faith, to your light a stargazer's paradise the moons' crescent shape eternity's timelessness this haven of escape if only to capture our moment of bliss the crystalized fantasy of the snow's melting kiss the call to commitment shatters pipedreams above the torment of this secrecy the transience of our love [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (12-03-2004 07:48 AM).] |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Beautiful.......just beautiful, you capture so much here ~P |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
love that last verse I can relate too well |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Lovely write...beautiful.  ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* |
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