Open Poetry #34 |
Apologies to all for letting things get through to me yesterday |
DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
It was a bad hair day On moments of words To make Teeth growing longer Snap at food Trapped by a pan As nails grew Shoes split I ate the pan Not enough flavour In pans these days Feeling a little stronger Arms a little longer Bath was an option Swinging in Was Not an idea It makes the keyboard wet And so with a long mind to match a face Speaking what I feel In the wrong place Still today seems a good day And maybe Bombay A joust At another way Dave |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
One so striven, by guilt driven is surely forgiven |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
My goodness, Dave! You certainly do not paint a very pretty picture of yourself! Your photo doesn't look anything like that! I think you are much better looking! Hope you are having a much better day! Warm hugs, Linda |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
And I do hope today is better for you... and the sun catches you smiling m'friend! Happy hugs~Nancy ~ let peace begin with me... ~ |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
huggles sweetie, we all have those moments thank you for writing and sharing |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
just thank God for aplogies, and for people that accept them.....don't know where we would be without them....great write |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Thanks all I promise to do my best not to let a day get through to me again. Dave |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Dave, you're okay. You are loved. |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Thanks but losing it is not what I should have done. regards Dave |
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time prophet Member
since 2003-07-30
Posts 371In New Zealand Amongst the Ancient Trees |
I didn't see where you lost anything? No apology needed. |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Guess I missed it - but whatever it was - we all lose it - and this is well written - hugs - Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Hey... Just be you, DavePage. "A joust At another way" Aren't we all that way sometimes? JL |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
sure hope things get better |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
I came because the title was so very perfect for me....and stayed because it was a good read from beginning to end! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
time prophet I lost it in some replies, the way I replied, things I wrote that were not applicable to what had actually been said. You know in yourself when you are doing something you feel you shouldn't and I was, I felt. Susan Thanks JL Just be you, DavePage. "A joust At another way" Aren't we all that way sometimes? JL Yes. MGROVES sure hope things get better So do I Ratleader I came because the title was so very perfect for me....and stayed because it was a good read from beginning to end! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> ______________Ratleader______________ Thanks all Dave |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
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