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Wobbly Head Bob
Member

since 2000-05-15

Posts 299
Virginia, USA

0 posted 2004-12-01 08:02 PM

Yes, again
I pretend
I know me well
But in the end
All I have
Are these beginings

Is the air I breath my own
Is this house I dwell my home
Where we are and when we go
I know, I know

Now and then
I'm content
In who you are
Then my friend
All thats real
Are vaired endings

What I see I make my own
In this Earth is what you've sown
When we're there we're not alone
I know, I know

I want to hurt and scream
I want to feel these things
In my self dilluting dream
I've torn apart these lifeless wings
Now I know, I know
I want to scrape my skin
Shed myself, be born again
Perhaps I'll be this time like you
And be what I could never do

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2004-12-01 08:34 PM

Bob, Sir...
it's been awhile since we've seen your stuff...

Welcome home...

and this, Sir...
is a hurtin', country type poem...

Hope you are well.

And if not well? Get there, soon...

miscellanea
Member Elite

since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

2 posted 2004-12-01 09:12 PM

Invention caught my eye. After reading it, I found it pulled at the heartstrings, as well! Very moving, WHB.

misc'e

Wobbly Head Bob
Member

since 2000-05-15

Posts 299
Virginia, USA

3 posted 2004-12-02 07:35 AM

Thank you both!

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

4 posted 2004-12-02 01:24 PM

Very nice Wobbly Head Bob!!

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

5 posted 2004-12-02 01:29 PM

I want to scrape my skin
Shed myself, be born again
Perhaps I'll be this time like you
And be what I could never do

Me too~~

M

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

6 posted 2004-12-02 10:04 PM

Love this! And your pip name is cute!

~Alli~

*:.AIM = Alli4000.:*
Don’t cry because it’s over, smile because it happened...

Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

7 posted 2004-12-03 12:20 PM

You have been missed...sad lovely write

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2004-12-03 12:37 PM

sad but beautiful...just the way I like 'em

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