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white water |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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I follow my fingers covering holes I watch the leaves falling fallowing low I follow my fingers they capture the role of the man with a following doubting his soul squatting the stance legging dispute dancing romance of his ill repute with a flute playing larger than he ever could laughing at laughter knowing he would wake the wave faster white water should make foam on the rocks that sit there too stern-- watching the white water play. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I am watching with you  M |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
you still have white water there it is brown here muddy like linseed oil soup being hurled from a diseased bowl huh? oh sorry that was the sewer farm they say the river is behind me going to the same ocean thoughts? enjoyed it lady!! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
now you don't want me to write of linseed? NOBODY wants me to write of that... it makes the oils pliable, and gives the cadmium the free of stroke... should I go on? that's the stuff that gives the whiskers in the brushes strength - oh I could go on -  and you? you'd like that, wouldn't ya?  *laughing* |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Better than anything on TV though isn't it? And it may all be true. POETS AGAINST THE WAR IS REDUNDANT |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
tv? is that a show? (Forgive my ignorance Rich, I have one channel now, and I watch the news, although I must blushingly confess I have a written-in-stone date for American Idol with my daughter. I must now blushingly confess that I am the one who holds her to the promise. )Other nights I just read though.  |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Write of linseed, lady... and make it stream through the song... Enjoyed this one very much! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
serenity You just gave me a shampoo and I have no hair. LOL exellent write.  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
ooooooooooooooh seymour! sounds slippery! I like slippery! Thank you lovie, for reading!  (and a for sunshine) |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Beautifully written m'lady, I saw every single detail. Very dramatic and vivid. I could feel the swirl of this. Mxx me keeps and i knew in the crystalline knowledge of you |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
good one |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I have to tell you that this is the first darn time I felt like dancing reading a poem of yours honest! I wanted to go flap flippers with ya in that water, slimy or not! I like really liked this one yanno? |
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