Open Poetry #34 |
Not a Poet (but so much more) |
Don_Juan Member
since 2004-04-08
Posts 252Far from where I am going |
She smiled standing in front of me asking what it was that i had been jotting down in this crimson notebook. My answer was "You." I proceeded to read. "Standing with silk hair flowing in subtle room breezes. eyes shining with sapphire reverence. she smiles and I succumb to euphoria." taken aback she giggled and expressed feelings of flattery and of disdain towards poets. But i am not a poet I'm nothing more than a truth spinner weaving emotional blankets from my words only a pen in longing confessing all to a page that occasionally slips into eyes of subjects. a man sensitive to all around. all of these but not a poet. (another quick write. I hope you all enjoy) nice use of muffin aim= FlyingScrew. message me if you feel. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
I see she said...you spell secrets. A delightful find here. Keep writing. TD |
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Don_Juan Member
since 2004-04-08
Posts 252Far from where I am going |
Thanks so much TD for being the only one to reply to this poem. nice use of muffin |
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