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In Loving Memory
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In Loving Memory |
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Fagin Member
since 2004-05-07
Posts 126Ca 
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Did you hear me? I called out to you, I know.. So much unsaid, too much gone by.. I wish there had been more.. Remembering days past... Summers were special times... Lazy afternoons, me cleaning the pool Cousins Aunts and friends would all swirl about.. The laughter was contagious.. I do miss yours.. You were a window into a world full of glamour Revealing, yet warning.. And never once did you treat me as a boy... But as a young man. Headstrong, Sharp and Elegant... You were all this and more.... I call out to you still.. And I'm glad you hear me. In Loving Memory Elizabeth M Givens 02-12-1912 11-26-04 |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
"And never once did you treat me as a boy... But as a young man." It is important in growing, to have someone like this. My condolances for your loss.  |
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Kevo Member
since 2004-06-02
Posts 466Navarro County, Texas, USA |
A wonderful tribute to her. She sounds like a great woman. Hold onto her. Rejoice in her life and her teachings to you. Keep them near and she will remain with you always. Your poem tugged at my heart. I understand your feelings and you conveyed them well in the overall tone of your poem. I really feel that you poured a great amount of time and energy into perfecting this poem and that is exactly what you accomplished. It is a brilliant tribute...a proud eulogy of sorts. I will be looking for more from you since your talent is obvious and should be appreciated. Warm regards and condolences, Kevin |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I doubt that any words I type can be of much comfort to you, but I did want to offer my condolences. Elegantly eloquent, you had my heart at "hello", as in that first stanza, which indeed expresses the pain of wondering if our loved ones knew that we loved them... sigh *hearthugs* |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
A lovely expression of affection and rememberance - thank you for sharing - heart hugs to you - Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Robert, you wrote a wonderful tribute to Grandmother in this piece...it reminds me of the poem that she wrote...simple, purposeful, and oh so full of love. You never fail to amaze me...and I never fail to be full of pride over you. Love, Sis |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
It appears to my eyes that a common bond exists between a sister and brother... Both having huge hearts with great love and compassion, both having sweet and precious memories of those they love... Both so in tune with their emotions and an ability to share them so well... You are both blessed...and so was she. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Time is made up of captured moments. The things shared and the moments spent together will become gifts that the heart won't ever forget. My deepest sympathy to you Robert, and your dear sister Karilea. Hearthugs. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
And never once did you treat me as a boy... But as a young man. A beautiful tribute to your Grandmother. I'm sorry for your loss. Maree |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
very touching~~ M |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
beautiful heart spill Robert, your words show how much inner beauty runs within your family and your heart. Well done sir. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Fagin God bless gramdmothers. Excellent write. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
My deepest condolences... believe in what your heart feels... |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
This is a fine tribute to one who so touched your life. In your heart and thoughts, she will live forever; that's not a bad legacy. Well done. Ken Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Fagin Member
since 2004-05-07
Posts 126Ca |
Thank you all for your kind words and thoughts... I am very new to this art and hope to grow.. many of you have helped me more that you know.. We do miss her very much, she was one of a kind Robert Rilling |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Rest in peace now Robert, reunited this day with your grandmother. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
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