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Open Poetry #34
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DavePage
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0 posted 2004-11-27 03:10 PM

Words drifted clear to me
I know your away
But I want to be
With some rubbish tucked away
Garden's a mess
Why not come and stay

Bad problems with systems
Control wasn't my control
Gotta see the local boss
Words don't matter
To him
At all

Plan me
Over the weekend
Front and back
Short on the sides
No tip
We cant afford me
Just me running the sides
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1 posted 2004-11-27 06:00 PM

Read and throughily enjoyed

Andrew
Ericc
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2 posted 2004-11-27 07:12 PM

Another unique write that captivates and captures a passing mood and different moment. Great write Dave!

Eric
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3 posted 2004-11-27 08:10 PM

Another amazing write Dave!

~Alli~

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