My words for your holiday and published before - call it Dusk

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Open Poetry #34

My words for your holiday and published before - call it Dusk

DavePage
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since 2003-12-21

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0 posted 2004-11-25 04:52 PM

Dusk illuminated a small window
Silhouetting a lamp
Lighting the way
To love and respect

Warming a path
Of return
To a lost one
Following a heart’s desire

Calling light
As a beacon
To echo through the darkness
Through the torrent

Sending a signal
To break
The quietness
Of one who waits

Breathing life
Fulfilment
To spirit his strength
To rest in your shadow

Matching your feelings
And understanding
Welcoming the return
Of one he lost

Honeybunch
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1 posted 2004-11-25 05:01 PM

Very nice, Dave. Enjoyed!

passing shadows
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2 posted 2004-11-26 06:09 AM

a fine scene you describe

*Alli4000*

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3 posted 2004-11-26 03:37 PM

I like this...

~Alli~

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Susan
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4 posted 2004-11-26 03:39 PM

Dave - this is very nicely done - i like the imagery drawn here -

Susan

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