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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2004-11-25 08:33 AM

you make an ocean
with the woman sides of you
I worship the salt of your tears
my dragon ship waits there

give me your fiords
let them be my harbors
my bow is war worn
my shields are scattered

give me breeze for my sails
they cannot bear the wind
they are lean to fragile
they are without stormguys

let me nudge your soft shores
with the rigid of my oar
moan for my timbers
your love of man song

haven me from the lonely sea
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Dark

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2004-11-25 08:48 AM

Oh, Thor and Odin would be pleased...

Excellent imagery...I felt the cold waters
lapping at the hull...

Thank you, Sir!

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

2 posted 2004-11-25 09:08 AM

make me a shell
so i can
get swept up
in your undertow

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

3 posted 2004-11-25 01:33 PM

Such beauty in this - and ache - and fragile - you are truly an incredible being -with depths like a fiord - and strength of that of the vikings -

I feel this deeply - so very

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

4 posted 2004-11-25 03:27 PM

"you make an ocean
with the woman sides of you
I worship the salt of your tears
my dragon ship waits there"

this is so beautiful...makes me want to read it over and over

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

5 posted 2004-11-25 04:04 PM

This is good

Dave

Martie

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

6 posted 2004-11-25 08:49 PM

DS

"give me your fiords
let them be my harbors
my bow is war worn
my shields are scattered"

I am trying to do that for the norseman that is my husband....thank you for writing it so well!

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2004-11-26 06:13 AM

incredible

*Alli4000*

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since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

8 posted 2004-11-26 03:40 PM

amazing write...wow.

~Alli~

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