Open Poetry #34 |
Finalé |
Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Finalé Snow, clinging to leaves Fall waited, winter’s first kiss Shivered, melting tears |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
how lovely is that... **babygirL** **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
damn lady... that's beautiful! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
shivered melting tears well done Karilea.... Did you see that mountain climbing show last evening? It was awesome, could not turn it off? Anyway, your poem reminded me of such. Thank you |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
The transitions of the eternal wheel of the seaons seem to draw out our best. This is a fine welcome to winter. Ken Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
A lovely picture window, sissy! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
pretty |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
It sounds like the weather we had yesterday. I must admit it affected my mood! Enjoyed your poem. miscellanea |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wow...ok...one more wow! A truly wonderful write. Eric |
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