Open Poetry #34 |
As I Stop And Reminisce |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Picture by Alan Ayers * * * I walk slowly through the door And brush the cobwebs away Your shed was once your refuge A place you came to every day The smell of cedar oil And wood carved long ago Your place of quiet contentment Where your skills were put on show I would watch you as you worked Your hands were cracked and dry Fond memories I now relive As a tear escapes my eye I inhale familiar scents As I stand amongst my thoughts You were a gentle man of peace So many lessons you once taught As I glance around your workshop It is your presence that I miss Memories come flooding back As I stop and reminisce * * * As most of you know, it was through grief at losing my dearly loved father that led me to writing. He was a carpenter by trade and I have many fond memories of watching him on the woodturning machine which he was so very skilled at. I called in home one day a couple of years ago and stood inside his shed, which had so long ago been abandoned. I felt his presence so strongly as I stood in silence and that experience inspired me to write this poem. I am in motion I am blue Love is an ocean I'm anchored in you - Shawn Mullins [This message has been edited by Suetang (11-23-2004 08:49 PM).] |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You are such a lovely and graceful writer of romance. A sigh usually escapes from my lips when I read your beautiful poetry. Love & Light, Linda |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very lovely memories here Sue. Hope you are well. Hugs, Nancy ~ Time has cast a spell on you, |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Such adoration in these words of your poem. This is such nice sentiment for the person in the story. So, so nice. JL |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful all around I love that picture! |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Sue You have a talent others would like. Push that talent forward. Dave |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
I was so deeply moved by your beautiful responses. This poem means so very much to me, as do your kind words. Take care........Sue I am in motion |
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