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Open Poetry #34

unsaid cowboy

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2004-11-23 08:17 AM

the books are heavy
my barrow tips
brick like tumble
from a ladder dream
wondering

about the unsaid
is it lonely inside
like your eyes
when you blink
and shut me out

for a lifetime moment

and do you search
when they open again
hurry foot on water
to take me to focus
or some other island

where you tie our fingers
like shoe strings together
and this time
you say knots are better
when they are pulled tight

and would you wet the leather?
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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2004-11-23 08:24 AM

can't help but smile at your words~~~

MM

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

2 posted 2004-11-23 08:24 AM

betcha she would!

Morning

As always your words weave questions
of magic!

Love your style cowboy!

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2004-11-23 08:30 AM

This comes across as sad to me, DS...
but we have to have those moments
to know the difference
of the good ones...

Tell us of how Tuesday tips and trips
through your twilight dawn?

babygirlwlove
Senior Member

since 2004-10-10

Posts 1180
New York City

4 posted 2004-11-23 08:51 AM

wet the leather....on my...lol

much love,
**babygirL**

**Intoxicant to the SouL**

Shelley
Member

since 2000-01-27

Posts 263
Ohio, USA

5 posted 2004-11-23 10:11 AM

a very interesting way of looking at things.

Knots are better when pulled tight!!

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

6 posted 2004-11-23 10:28 AM

I, like Sunshine, find this to have a melancholy feel - stirring more questions than answers - sending you warm hugs this morning - D -

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2004-11-23 08:06 PM

nice

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