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Open Poetry #34

For My Brother

Shelley
Member

since 2000-01-27

Posts 263
Ohio, USA

0 posted 2004-11-22 02:42 PM

I walked with my brother

   in the rain,

   down a road  of childhood  memories.

   Through puddles of delusion.

   Upward,

   to hills of understanding

   and awareness

   to a green valley rich

   in appreciated training,

   rainbowed

   in morals of love.

I walked with my brother,

  in the rain,

  traveling in his footsteps

  and he in mine.

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

1 posted 2004-11-22 02:56 PM

Nice!

Understood.
Enjoyed.

JL

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2004-11-22 05:48 PM

Very nicely written...much enjoyed the read.
Hugs~Nancy

~ Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me ~

Shelley
Member

since 2000-01-27

Posts 263
Ohio, USA

3 posted 2004-11-22 09:53 PM

Thanks for taking the time to read

Hugs

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2004-11-23 05:12 AM

sometimes it's nice to take that walk

I remember those walks with my brother, thanks for the read, enjoyed

Goldenrose
Member Elite

since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

5 posted 2004-11-23 05:20 AM

Walking in the rain..or snow is a most enjoyable pass time...thoughts can be expressed and felt between the people you love most...a fine write ..thank you...

Goldenrose.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2004-11-23 06:19 AM

This means a lot to me, Shelley...
please know that I'll be sharing
this one!

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? Keeping in mind, I must stand close...and keep my promises...

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

7 posted 2004-11-23 12:50 PM

Shelley~
You took me down a memoried lane~
My heart loves this one~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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