Open Poetry #34 |
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Dawning of a New Day |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Dawning of a New Day You are the constant in the word memoir. Constantly reminding me what I am, should be, and certainly could be… If I would have, and would now be listening… I am filled to the brim, of your pages chronicling me… I just hadn’t arrived, in my mind, ready for dealing. Not until urging the gentle ones to be free, readying for a void in their own history… I am now watching that dawn A brighter sun rising… |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I am now watching that dawn A brighter sun rising… Lovely JL! ![]() |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
drink it kiddo, take a great big gulp...and keep on drinking forever... A very touching write. |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Thoughtful, invocative, deceptively nudging Dave |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"I am now watching that dawn A brighter sun rising…" Very nicely said...much enjoyed the read. Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you, |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Super good JL. TD |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
This was so positive and uplifting, it speaks volumes to my heart... Thank you love and hugs~ARH Come,love all of me, mind, body, spirit..feel my passion, taste of me, be filled completely! |
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