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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2004-11-22 12:29 PM

You almost caught me
in my bouquet
of assorted colors,
sprinkled with madness
and melodrama,
laced with the etchings
of a heart interrupted,

you could have had me;

my glove found itself
dropping, as i reached
out for you,
but your hand withdrew
o so suddenly,
and i need not ponder
on the whys of it all,

you almost had me;

but i know that you knew
i really was too crazy
anyhow, for even one like you.

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (11-23-2004 11:22 PM).]

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2004-11-22 12:33 PM

inkedgoddess
Interesting write, enjoyed the read.

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

2 posted 2004-11-22 12:33 PM

just wow, and then pow, the ending perfects it! Wonderful write.

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

3 posted 2004-11-22 12:51 PM

I know this feeling too.

JL

She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

4 posted 2004-11-22 01:31 PM

emotions which have been felt through your words

Good Write

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2004-11-22 05:38 PM

oh yeah...damn!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2004-11-22 05:54 PM

"laced with the etchings
of a heart interrupted,"

Excellent Michele! Especially enjoyed the above lines.
Hugs~Nancy

~ Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me ~

bbent
Senior Member

since 2001-01-07

Posts 521
Alaska

7 posted 2004-11-22 06:23 PM

loved the last stanza...what the hell,sanities highly overated.

Live like it's your last day...
Dance like nobody's watching...
Love like you've never been hurt...

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

8 posted 2004-11-22 07:19 PM

too crazy or too sane, it seems sometimes difficult to tell between the both and I will try (from now on) to "catch" you everytime inked one.

Enjoyed

Mxx

into this night i wonder, it's morning that i dread, another day of knowing of, the path i fear to tread.
~Sarah McLachlan~

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

9 posted 2004-11-22 07:59 PM

Enjoyed this - and all the thoughts it brings to mind - I like being on the edge of "out there" - makes life more interesting

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

10 posted 2004-11-22 08:43 PM

YOU?

Crazy?

*sniff* I'm sorry, but you're application has been denied due to the sanity of this particular post.

Much enjoyed, lady.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

11 posted 2004-11-23 11:17 PM

Enjoyed...very nice...James

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

12 posted 2004-11-24 08:33 AM

crazy works
if you can stay that way
not just do it from time to time

enjoyed this ms inky

choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

13 posted 2004-11-24 10:51 AM

Beautiful!

....and their loss
becomes another's joy...
in the loosening grip
of the "almost"
that does not count,
you free-fall into the abyss
only to discover
the long dark decent
is an emergence into life.

~P

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