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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2004-11-17 08:55 PM

You wore yellow the day we met,
screeching like a schoolbus
or some shocked banana
that wandered in a icecream barge;
you rang of neon clowns and cowardice
jaundiced skin and bad genes,
and men that were peculiar,former
nerds and misfits back in highschool;
i dared you to go home and change
and return with the beast next time;
you came back, a desperado in black attire
carrying boxes filled with charms,
trinkets of blacklace and binding ties,
blindfolds and harlequin dramas
having me greet your naughty side,
the one that lurks in your boyscout eyes,

that late monday morning
when the sun dripped yellow of sin and desire,
and lessons of superficial wrappings on boxes
that opened to your most delicious and decadent surprise.

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (11-17-2004 10:34 PM).]

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

1 posted 2004-11-17 09:10 PM

Wow...this is G R E A T! Loved it!

jwesley

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

2 posted 2004-11-17 09:12 PM

Oh goodie, this is delicious girlie!
It is truly what's inside that counts!!!

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

3 posted 2004-11-17 09:16 PM

Clearing my throat two or three times...

Wow!

ice
Member Elite

since 2003-05-17

Posts 3404
Pennsylvania

4 posted 2004-11-17 10:30 PM

Inky
I always did love decadent suprises,
still do...

enjoyed
___________ice
><>

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

5 posted 2004-11-18 08:30 AM

and bill bic blurted out
I will call it a pen

enjoyed this ms ink

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

6 posted 2004-11-18 08:34 AM

I'm rolling back my eyelids and going in for another read....well done!

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

7 posted 2004-11-18 08:44 AM

I have never read a poem of yours that I didn't come away with something special. Each write is a gift to the reader! It truly is.

EA

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

8 posted 2004-11-18 09:17 AM

Loved this!!

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

9 posted 2004-11-18 09:21 AM

OH Michele!! I love this!!
*click* into my library!
Hugs~Nancy

~ Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me ~

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

10 posted 2004-11-18 12:41 PM

Huummmmmm...
I need to close my eyes while I read this...
Nice...

JL

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

11 posted 2004-11-18 01:00 PM

This was great - and gifted a smile -

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

12 posted 2004-11-20 09:14 AM

So glad I found this...
Delicious in its surprise...indeed oh gifted one.
TD

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

13 posted 2004-11-20 02:55 PM

This is an amazing write! Enjoyed~

~Alli~

*:.AIM = Alli4000.:* My Journal
Don’t cry because it’s over, smile because it happened...

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

14 posted 2004-11-20 05:01 PM

WOW Just bloody WOW....More please.. this is one of your best Inked.

going to my library.

Maree

into this night i wonder, it's morning that i dread, another day of knowing of, the path i fear to tread.
~Sarah McLachlan~

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

15 posted 2004-11-20 06:25 PM

Michele, this is brilliant. I love the
descriptions that you give.
Hugs,

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

16 posted 2004-11-20 07:51 PM

whew! you go!

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

17 posted 2004-11-21 02:43 PM

into this night i wonder, it's morning that i dread, another day of knowing of, the path i fear to tread.
~Sarah McLachlan~

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

18 posted 2004-11-21 04:47 PM

The growth in writing
that is displayed in this piece
is remarkable, and wonderful!

Congrats, Michele, on a job well done!

~eternal child~
Junior Member

since 2004-11-23

Posts 31

19 posted 2004-11-23 07:57 AM

super write

i'm loving this place

~ec~

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

20 posted 2004-11-23 08:19 AM

so then what...

oh will go look in mature..
kewl stuff ms ink

choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

21 posted 2004-11-24 11:19 AM

Gasping for breath........~P

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

22 posted 2004-11-24 11:21 AM

oh wow....
darn gal.
click* library bound....

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