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Open Poetry #34

The Eglomise Promise

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2004-11-21 04:46 PM

Sauntering dreamscapes of moss
Star lit disturbances repeat and pause
Repeat and pause
Unfaltering

To see and be seen
Each pulse procured in silent screen
The soft of pound, pulse given sound
Review all through the done and do
In pastel picture heart to heart
Recants the vision given start
Repeat and pause

Radiance of see through cause
Painting premise winter walls
Winter calls
Un-altering

Copyright Kkh 11/21/04

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

1 posted 2004-11-21 04:54 PM

Like the power

Dave

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

2 posted 2004-11-21 05:01 PM

Every post you put on the page...makes me
run to my dictionary...Perhaps I will catch
up in about 30 years or so. Eglomise...
now that one is a good un, for sure....
Flarrs included...

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2004-11-22 04:32 AM

excellent!

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