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Shedding
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
This shell I carry as my home Pulled tight in deepest waters roam The snug of nooks made yellow gold A trickling tide pulls moons soft hold I wander shore on purpose filled To leave the conk and curvy spilled And shed, to bloom within your hands ~*~ As stood, a little feel good on damp and tender feat Abrasions paper thin-skinned words in easy does it meet Stand up kinds of remedy respond the inner tall of me Naïve the vestment nude to pearl throughout this china destiny And shed, the hurt now bled~*~ And left behind the prism blind, response in just a state of mind That wished be fished of ink so red, anew the threads resound instead So soft the blessing rains…on roof and rafter…wood be stains Beside you build the porch around, these digs more fitting to be found Copyright Kkh 11/20/04 |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh, this one likes me very much, from the title throughout... all must go through a metamorphosis of shedding...or the shell, cocoon, skin, whichever, whatever, withers the encapsulated soul, and perishes. Oh, this one captured my imagination and set it to flight! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
And shed, to bloom within your hands ~*~ These are whispers of great beauty, dear TD! Love, Margherita |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wonderful! |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
You do write some amazing poetry, and this is one of many. JL |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I am always in awe, when I read your excellent poetry. Beautiful writing!! Hugs,  |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
I like Sunshine's reply - about morphing - changing, shedding - this poem does make one consider and as always is worded in pure delight -  SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
This shell I carry as my home Pulled tight in deepest waters roam The snug of nooks made yellow gold A trickling tide pulls moons soft hold I wander shore on purpose filled To leave the conk and curvy spilled and a glorious voyage it was and still is |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
very stunning write TD! Enjoyed immensely! |
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