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Open Poetry #34

Day 253 cold rain

Krawdad
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since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

0 posted 2004-11-20 02:27 AM

                      Day 253

                      cold rain

                      An evening
                      quiet of you
                      so again
                      I listen to my
                      shoe soles slap
                      street concrete

                      I walk with no talk
                      in the cold rain
                      and the miles
                      become trials
                      of circles

                      we dance deftly
                      in the ether
                      of either's
                      imagination

                      but have no sense
                      of the senses
                      secluded

                      my will
                      over chill

                      eluded

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2004-11-20 09:33 AM

                     "we dance deftly
                      in the ether
                      of either's
                      imagination"

Excellent excellent write as usual..
love the lines above.
I am truly enjoying this series.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me ~

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2004-11-20 10:00 AM

nice

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2004-11-20 04:24 PM

No talk, but beautiful thoughts!

Love it.
Love, Margherita

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