Open Poetry #34 |
The Stillness Of Writing |
Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
In quiet hours...I am the words. And the page waits to receive me. Grateful to be filled. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
How quietly calming this is Eric... Well done! ~ Time has cast a spell on you, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes, you are |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Smiling at PS... YES, you are! echoed the chorus. Your depth of art is stunning Eric TD |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
loved this so completely |
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~DreamChild~ Senior Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 544in your dreams |
I like short poems, especially when they say alot. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
You have a wonderful name! LOL! I like the mood and the simplicity. Nicely done! Eric |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
This is so soft and beautiful. So much said in so few words. Brava. |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
I loved the calm reflective image these few words cast upon my soul this morning. A fantastic bit of writing. hugs, Marti A single sunbeam is enough to drive away many shadows. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Framing this one and hanging it on my wall... Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? Keeping in mind, I must stand close...and keep my promises... |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Yes, you've hit the nail on the head. Well said! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I am a page just waiting to come alive! lol Write on! Linda |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ericc A delight to read. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Oh ....I will be the page receiving the caress of your words. I will be the white cloud recording the dance of your thoughts. I will be the blue ocean rocking your dreams on the crest of my waves. I will be the womb of creation opening to your inspiration, giving birth to new life. I will be the heart of matter receiving your pure spirit to sing the tune of love. "In quiet hours ..." you are deeply inspiring, dear Eric. Yes, you are the words and I read you ... and love you. Margherita |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Short and sweet; love it! ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* My Journal |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
In the quiet hours The toast is burning The coffee roasted The eggs hard And the page waits to receive me. Grateful to be filled. Nice one Eric Dave |
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