Open Poetry #34 |
day dream rainbows |
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
after the satin slips to sighs and the music is warm love liquor when your eyes are doe eyes and sin has melted to pools on fevered skin then you dance your woman you are willow on wind with sky mind you feather your steps, gownless you are summer and winter you are tall mist shimmering in the arms of your day dream you are a bowl of rainbows with your colors of love and at the edge of your smile the gold is a heartshape diamond __________________ Dark |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
And you are beautiful to see thus... your treasures cannot be held by any chest... keep looking at women your way... because the rest of us continue to hope that others will follow suit. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sun..yes one must look at them as gifts ...thanks to you ms |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
gifts indeed... well done sir... always enjoy the journey.. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
oh now sir this is just so very very lovely and brings a smile to my lil heart... this m'friend is worth it's weight in diamonds. |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Sigh - you write lovely so well and wrap it as a gift of the simple pleasure of being lost in your words - I like to linger in the sensation - Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I love the feeling this left me with D. Warm, wanted and cherished. Hugs~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
cpat, thanks amigo for the review.. __________________ ms GS, slow hugs lady friend, you smile me with your warm _____________ ms susan, my satin shimmer, lean close to the sigh fire, let it brand your moments with the slow love man's answer. _______________ me E lady..thank you little one, for stepping close and touching with your eye hands..a kiss to your wrist.. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS Lovely words to wrap around me on this cold autumn morning. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms martie, come snuggle my neighbor lady friend...slow hugs to you and thanks to you |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I love this side of your creativity. Absolutely stunning and magical. Love & Rainbow Lights, EA |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes, magical indeed |
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