Open Poetry #34 |
The Kettles Sweat |
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
The Kettles Sweat The morning still The kettles Spill Dew drops of The dawning’s Fill The firmament Of eons Pour And I am drunk Forever More |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nice.. Sy... very nice... enjoyed this... |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Sy....drunk forever more?...you too?...join the club...you'll get used to it though...I've only been "high" once in my life....(haven't come down since)...oh wait, that's not what ya meant...well done and interesting write Sigh...how ya been?....you still taking those poetry vitamins I see... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I heard the whistle of the kettle sing, let's see who else this ditty may bring... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Can we make Chai tea with that water Sy? I could hear your kettle whistle all the way up here in Canada. ~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
very lovely Sey, good morning. |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
A very interesting write Sy. I too heard the kettle resonating through the mountains here in NH. hugs, Marti A single sunbeam is enough to drive away many shadows. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice read |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Howdy! I too, am delightfully drunk on dawn's dew drops! A sip or two for me and you! Wrapping you in my downy feathers, EA |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
nicely said, Pa Kettle! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
ah...a different form for you it looks good on you, yes |
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