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Meaningless Confessions
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Meaningless Confessions |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Meaningless Confessions Somewhere it waits for me... the openness needed to bring out the restlessness that consumes and keeps me wound so tightly. It is there, kept hidden, treasured from my keep giving me awkward moments. My tongue tied, the knots preventing me from saying what my heart wishes to reveal. And it is all up to you, to take the reins, to allow the freedom from hurt in this; a fantasy world the mind dreams up. I ramble on, day after day expectations a thing of the past, but wanting to dance closer, slowly, to feel the walls come down. Wanting your body warmth to incite a riot, the kind that flames, an intensity to put away all doubts and dress me in your tomorrows. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Visual, intense feeling, excellent writing Dave |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
This is sensual. Well done. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you Dave...nice to see you again  M |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
You snuck in there Nan... I was just dreaming~~~  M |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Hummm…hum…hum… You pen magic in your writings. Very nice read, smooth… JL |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very nicely done here Maureen!! Much enjoyed the read. Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
dang! you go girl! |
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