Open Poetry #34 |
Warm Layers Of Love |
A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Cold wind blows, upon my window sill, As I lay underneath, warm covers, thermals on, silently still, Warm and cozy, all snuggled like a mouse, As the snowflakes fall, pilling one by one, upon my house, Frosted window panes, remind me of my heart, Will sunshine ever come again? Will winters chill ever end, love so warm, enter in, and make the coldness depart, Who will get cozy with me?, underneath my warm layers of love, melting away the frosted ice, from my window panes, Allowing sunshine to warm me once again,peel back my layers, see my bare, naked heart, I have warm layers of love, to cover your every part.... |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
A lovely loving poem of warmth and beauty, from a heart to match. I will get cozy with you....while the flakes fall silently... Thank you for this fine poem Love Goldenrose.xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Phil, Bring your thermals....and melt away the frosted ice.... Hot chocolate later.... You would be cozy inside my heart full of warm, fluffy love.... Love ~VQ Come,love all of me, mind, body, spirit..feel my passion, taste of me, be filled completely! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
This is soft and warm like a cozy blanket. Well done, enjoyed. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely...James |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
precious |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Delightful read! Amazing... ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* My Journal |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is beautiful, ARH. Nice, warm, and cuddly!! Hugs, |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"Will winters chill ever end, love so warm, enter in, and make the coldness depart, Who will get cozy with me?, underneath my warm layers of love, melting away the frosted ice, from my window panes," Eeeee-yaow! Had to read this several times. Now I need a cool-off period! Too exciting. JL |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
I think this is great Dave |
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Shelley Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 263Ohio, USA |
you won't have trouble finding someone to get cozy with .... with expressions like this... no trouble at all! very nice |
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