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Arrested Flashings
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Arrested Flashings |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Arrested Flashings Split, spliced seconds mingling moments, time transcendent in smelling pine, fresh home-baked bread and ironed clothes my voice, her throat, curling, composed caress, calming children’s cries, verdant color eyeing curves grown round all that loved, she was someone, mine in spare moments not quite gone, just caught in places yet to travel she had to go first, but too soon… she would be smiling today, but, yes, now, here, arrested flashings… it won’t matter if you understand or not, it won’t matter to anyone but you, brother and you, sister and me. ~*~ I love you, Mom JSR – 7-10-31 - 11-18-92 Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? Keeping in mind, I must stand close...and keep my promises... |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
A tribute, heartfelt warm and charming love for a mom. You are an amazing daughter, and sister. In this write and I know in your living too. Beautiful poem Sunshine. JL |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Love you bunches... (and you are supposed to warn us when it is a tear jerker!!)  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Holidays are the hard times...but the special remembering eases the missing of. hugs M |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
yes lady....feeling this one with you. love it. love you. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea/sissy Sending understanding hugs your way.   |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Lovely, packed gently with emotion. It is the way of things; the way it's supposed to go, we certainly weep if our child preceeds us, and yet the tears are ever-present even when things find their proper order...it almost always feels too soon. I love the "my voice her throat" line! Whether on the shoal or on the shore, I'll seek the lighthouse evermore. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful remember Karilea.. Sending heart hugs your way. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Uniquely and wonderfully written my friend. Nice to see it written in a new way. jimmy |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
Beautiful tribute - touched. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Beautiful tribute Karilea from me. Mxx into this night i wonder, it's morning that i dread, another day of knowing of, the path i fear to tread. |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Compacted emotions, enough words to say the hearts feelings and not one extra...Fine example of the modern form... enjoyed, messege and arrangement __________ice/ford |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Beautiful...  ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* My Journal |
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