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If I Forget
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If I Forget |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England 
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If I Forget If ever I should forget The touch of your lips Slipping over my soul In a whisper of want Remind me Speak again of love Let the warm breath Of your spirit Waft through my heart Brush my soul With gentle murmurs Of remember If I ever should forget How your breath tastes In the dawn Trembling on my skin Bringing visions Of heat to my mind Recall my dreams Of heated fire That spirals within At the sight of Your liquid eyes If I should ever forget The warmth of you The way your breath Stirs my hair, my heart Wrapping my sighs in Oh Tell me, remember Summon my spirit Bring me back In mind to your side Where rainbows drip colour Into pools of joy If I should forget ever The truth of you Speak just once of fire And I’ll remember The heat that flared Recall my spirit If I should forget To remember the Magic Of you Marsha Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Marsha It's always so nice to see your happy face and to read your fine words of love and romance. Here are a couple of favourite quotes that I'd like to share with you. "...you have bereft me of words, Only my blook speaks to you through my veins" and this..... "Drink to me only with thine eyes And I will pledge with mine Or leave a kiss but in the cup And I'll not look for wine" I hope you liked those, Marsha and I hope your life is filled with much love and happiness. Take care........Sue I am in motion I am blue Love is an ocean I'm anchored in you - Shawn Mullins |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
always beautiful positive words and thoughts when reading you hugs M |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
That's tender, Marsha. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is pretty |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Sweet Marsha dearest, I know you will never forget that feeling of love. You have worded it so beautifully my friend. Hugs, Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Ah girlie girl...isnt it sad that sometimes we do have to be reminded to do something as simple as say I love you...thanks |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Marsha, you're an inspiration. OK, you knew that already. Look what you made me write: I forgot you with another man, another hand that held my hopes and life. Another breath that warmed my throat, another skin like soft and yielding silk upon my breast. I forgot you in a summer night, a light and fitful breeze played with my curls and I forgot my world. And yet, perhaps... Perhaps in some forgotten dream you touched my cheek and feather-kissed my brow. A sadness came upon me and I could not explain to him the reason for my tears. For I could not explain to me what I forgot or how. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Lovely write my friend. jwesley |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Thank you everyone, you are all so special and kind to one who doesn't get in here as often as she should. Nan darling one THAT is superb and should be posted on its own. I really truly love it. On my post it won't get the exposure it should, but posted in its own right it should garner the applause it deserves. as always Mushy  Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
My dear Sis, Something tells me you'll NEVER forget! This was beautiful and touches deep within the soul. You have a talent for writing of such deep love, such deep passion, and never missing a beat. Hugs, Amy  "When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter" |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Silky...James |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"Recall my spirit If I should forget To remember the Magic Of you" Oh yeah... This IS a love song. Great write Marsha. JL |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Like this - yes Dave |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
"Recall my spirit If I should forget To remember the Magic Of you" Loved that part! Amazing write!! ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* My Journal |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Since I first heard you read this, I had the chance to see the movie The Notebook... This reminds me a bit of that... and vice versa. *S* For some loves last even beyond our human limitations... and are our safety rope back to remembering. *S* Beautiful work! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Reminding you...James |
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