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You Were The Words To My Music
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You Were The Words To My Music |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia 
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 Picture by Alan Ayers * * * There was a time we were oblivious To almost everything but love I bloomed when in your presence How we fit like hand in glove You were the words to my music Our hearts sang in perfect tune Your love was all I lived for How easily you made me swoon But you also loved another Now my heart has lost its voice At the end of your performance You'd already made your choice Now I sit amongst love's ruins Wondering where our love went wrong We once made such beautiful music But how very sad now was the song I am in motion |
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Shelley Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 263Ohio, USA |
you had me swaying to the music! This is wonderful. Well as wonderful as wonderful can be "sitting amongst love's ruins" I need I hug after reading this one. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Shelley I am so very grateful for your comment. I must confess that this was pure fiction. Take care..........Sue I am in motion |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Whether you pen it happy or sad, about emotions or nature, or even when you are giving us a bit of history ... you always write it beautifully and it is a treat. |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Your words of love be it fiction or otherwise are always worth reading Sue..thank you.. Goldenrose. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Such a beautiful bittersweet write Sue. Always always a pleasure to read. Hugs~Nancy ~ Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Sue... Sadly touching and so realistic. I really hope that this tender hurting piece is only fictional. I always enjoy reading you so much...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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~DreamChild~ Senior Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 544in your dreams |
A melody indeed. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Beautiful bluesy words and images Sue. I like the song tie in. Eric |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
such a melancholy beauty Sue, well done. good to see you. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 oh my |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
Loved this - super read - thank you. |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
What a beautiful poem this is, Sue.... bittersweet. Hugs,  |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Soooo very nice. Great poem! JL |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Sue Loved your words Dave |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
BEAUTIFUL!!! I love this!!  ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* My Journal |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
I am indebted to all of you for so many wonderful comments. I'm so glad you all liked my words. Take care........Sue I am in motion |
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