Open Poetry #34 |
Park Bench |
kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
Park Bench I have heard of a bench that’s quite known to all That is used by some spirits some days in the Fall. You can find such a bench near a creek ‘neath a tree. And I hope it comes true that which happened to me. For I came to this bench with my worries and strife And a spirit was there; she was so full of life. Now I think of this spirit with all of her care For you see, we’re all nurtured by spirits somewhere. On that bench all my worries were lifted from me. When I asked of the spirit how it happened to be, She related that one day she’d come to that scene And she found that her worries became quite serene. But she offered as well this quite sobering thought That her magic would only be good, as it ought. If you knew by yourself you could easily wrench All the cares in your life by that magical bench. Photo, courtesy, KRJ [This message has been edited by Sunshine (10-21-2004 08:18 PM).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Now that's a park bench every neighborhood needs! Imagine if there were millions of them scattered 'round the world. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ken Everyone needs a place to go, where they can sit and reflect on the beauty around and leave all the worries behind. I'm glad you found this place in time and space. A wonderful poem, my friend! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ken, I know a poet of our very own who would inhabit such a bench; and I'll bet you were guided here, and a photo from me, you'd wrench! I love the fact that this poet knows both the likes of you, and of me... for this poet I love, thinks just like you... and finds such a bench a mystery... she hears the sounds that no one hears, she feels the spirits that just ARE... and her words, I feel, have been felt by you... she is THAT type of evening star... So thank you for asking, I'm glad I helped a poet in need, for a photo he yelped! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Such an enchanting and magical place to have found Ken. And your wonderful words to take us there. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
save me a spot there, okay? |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Such a place can be transitory, or it can become so filled with meaning that it is virtually a shrine....Yes...so many spiritual dimensions that shrine is the right word. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I admire this greatly...I am saving this to my library thank you Ken |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
*smiling at Karilea* |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Sigh, this is beautiful kayjay...save me a spot too? it's a Maree and I am haunted |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You may have helped many a troubled soul with this inspirational poem. They could now be out there looking for such a place to unburden themselves of their problems or to at least put things into proper perspective. An oasis of a poem! Warm, autumnal hugs, Linda |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
My personal bench is a sand dune on the beach down the street from me. Night or day, it always holds me just right. I read this one first silently but then came back and read it aloud. It encases a rhythm to it that entices the reader on. Beautiful from the first line to the last. |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
I give thanks to all who have stopped by my bench To whisper a prayer for some healing and such I hope that you know a small place all your own That helps you to heal whenever you're down. Thanks to all. Ken Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
*stopping by again* |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Ken Such a wonderful piece of writing which left me feeling at peace. The picture was simply breathtaking and your words took me there. Take care.......Sue I am in motion |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
please move over, Ken . . . |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
come on here Sue *patting place beside me* |
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