Open Poetry #34 |
The Creaking Chair |
MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
The Creaking Chair Copyright 2004 by:Mark V Sheldon Wicked wind will whisper words While weaving waxing wicks Brushing brooms become black birds By breaking brimstone bricks Shadow’s shroud shall shelter shoals Should shameful shaman share Carnal calls cast cauldron coals Crowd circles creaking chair You CAN make a difference, but first you should learn how: http://educate-yourself.org/intro.shtml |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Fun, Mark - love the use of the "letters" and the spooky seasonal feel - Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I love lyrically alliterative poetry! ~ and anything about things that go bump ~ or creak! ~ in the night! Great write MVS! EA |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Hi Mark! Love the alliterations...especially "Shadow’s shroud shall shelter shoals Should shameful shaman share" That one I found very difficult to say aloud quickly. Hugs~ ~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
That is it, I knew it was an "A" word that brought this to us. Sorta like, Awwwwwright, Attaway, and a few others. Nicely done Mark |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
MARK, Well done enjoyed the read. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
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J.Samm Member
since 2004-01-12
Posts 415Iloilo City, Philippines |
splendid wordplay you've got here! |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Thank you, Susan. Halloween is so much more fun than Christmas... EA: it was challenging but enjoyable. As for the things that go "bump in the night"... Hiya, Nancy. Yes -- that one sure shounds shtrange. Thank you, Barry. I'm glad you enjoyed. Sy: thank you for noticing. Kacy: Yeah... it's kind of like that. J.Samm, I appreciate the compliment. -MVS You CAN make a difference, but first you should learn how: http://educate-yourself.org/intro.shtml |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Mark, I have always attempted to write like this, you have far surpassed the limits. |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
littlewing, you have humbled me... thank you for the nice words. -MVS You CAN make a difference, but first you should learn how: |
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