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and then morning (from moonlight seduction)
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and then morning (from moonlight seduction) |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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does morning find you there at the window of our dreams where we are the dancers without a world around do your eyes see my poems written in the sand do you read them with whispers and clutch them to your breasts do you look around in the mist for your shadow man standing and are your feet swift to run to the tree of my stature do you hear my songs when you climb my limbs and drape your woman over me gownless in your willing when we are the dawn day sky _______________ Dark scribblenote: thank you susiemuse for making me think nice things (on occasion only please) [This message has been edited by Sunshine (11-15-2004 09:09 AM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you Susie... Excellent work, DS... |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Dark - when morning comes and the sky is lit with the fresh kiss of the sun, it glows in celebration of two lovers meeting - and tears of joy are shed over love words in the sand and the sight of the woman lingering amongst the trees in the shadows - this is beautiful -  SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sunshine, thanks lady friend for your reads.. ___________ ms susan, glad you enjoyed it..thank you for your seduction..now please lock the door lest I be tempted.. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
smiles, ahhhh DS you are always seducing...lest the ladies love your style, format and whisper soft words... Very well done |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
do you hear my songs when you climb my limbs and drape your woman over me gownless in your willing when we are the dawn day sky ============================ you are a master at poetic personification and seduction...kewl write in the sand poet man.  |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Outstanding Dark. TD |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
does morning find you there at the window of our dreams where we are the dancers without a world around Nice, would be putting it mildly~ Your muse is quite lovely in the dark before the dawn. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thanks to you all for your review a pleasure to know your eyes D |
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