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Cupped Close In The Music
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Cupped Close In The Music |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
The water sparkles tonight Like a starlit panorama of glass Releasing my heart to skip the ripples there Let follow with my mind in the serenade of evening Not sure if it was your tears that I kissed, or my own Mostly positive they were both The space here beside me feels warm As if the moonlight has purpose holding that place My hand gravitates, and reality proves nothing new In the drifting out of peace, I remark so many one-way streets Noisy and urgent…knowing I was lost, yet turning destined knots Knowing I was tied there, something to teach and learn That echo sparkles tonight Through pine bows and the smell of cedar in my blood The close of something…a moist breath at my shoulder Empty, that space…quiet in that place…my hand gravitates there The ducks laugh at the moonrise, careless and rampant they baud The water sparkles tonight…and I drink in thirst of the music Copyright Kkh 11/14/04 |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wow...beautiful!! Eric |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Oh TD - I find myself swallowed into the beauty of your words - you weave magic -  SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I say again dear Kathy, onward..to the stars and beyond.. is there a topic that you cannot turn into silk? |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
This entire poem was stunning, but this part this way you ended it, served up a beginning standing 10 feet tall! That echo sparkles tonight Through pine bows and the smell of cedar in my blood The close of something…a moist breath at my shoulder Empty, that space…quiet in that place…my hand gravitates there The ducks laugh at the moonrise, careless and rampant they baud The water sparkles tonight…and I drink in thirst of the music |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
The water sparkles tonight Like a starlit panorama of glass Releasing my heart to skip the ripples there you bring me right there, with heart in hand ready to release and revel in the sheer joy of love without conditions. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Releasing my heart to skip the ripples there ~~~ You braid such beautiful words together... |
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