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As softly as I left....
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As softly as I left.... |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA 
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I left for home without words to anyone not just you. Late afternoon theft a stranger in my room pacing length and breadth don't worry It's only me not just you. Stolen courage and grasp are somewhere in our home hidden in your bed? afraid to make the first move.. so I will arrive as softly as I left. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
And the one word given upon your return would be? ~*~ Excellent, Gemma! |
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Marshalzu  
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Wonderful writing Gemjop  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow...you always leave me speechless |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
You have such power in your poetry...such sharp and clear bouquet. I really liked this Gemma. TD |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Awesome...!! Eric |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Excellent - SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Your poetry is like fine wine, it's all so good, and then some. Hugs, gemma gemma~ |
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