Open Poetry #34 |
i luv U paulie |
inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
i luv u paulie you're like magick to me you feel my heart throb in my hands and tell me everything will be alright that it's not me, it's the state of this world's affairs, you make me a child again with your wandful of giving wishes and play the piper as i metamorphasize into air then follow the sounds of your zenflute and sit alongside you, like 2spirits uniting, on parallel purple paths, i luv u paulie we rise above brooklyn bridges where childhood dreams bounce off the bay you color me in pastels and draw flights of freebirds and rainbow caterpillers in 3-D visions on this dull afternoon, you make freedom ring, i luv you paulie with rose petals and chocolate kisses misty mountain hop life is but a dream............ [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (11-14-2004 11:13 AM).] |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
A toast to the Goddess! All good things belong in the lap of such a wonderful woman. TD |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Such a happy joyful piece this is Michele! Made me feel like skipping down the street! Hugs YOU! ~ Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Mmmmm - this reads sweetly to the heart - Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Beautiful ode to joy, peace and this "wide-awake dream" called life...~P |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
with rose petals and chocolate kisses misty mountain hop life is but a dream............ we toast with wine, blood-red as the maple leaves that cling to branches despite the harsh November winds in this wide-awake dream called life. ~P |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
nicely written...loved it! ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* My Journal |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
you rock, goldielocks~ |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thanks a bunch guys and dolls |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
as I have always said: Ginsberg and Kerouac would be proud. *smile* |
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